Writing an interesting lead or introduction that hooks readers is one of the most difficult things about writing (next to finding the best title for your article, chapter, or book, of course). Your lead has to hook editors, publishers, and readers – and your introduction has to have pizzazz, razzle dazzle, and sparkle! 

“Your first sentence is the most important part of the entire equation,” writes Jenna Glatzer in Make a Real Living as a Freelance Writer. “Put yourself in a busy section editor’s shoes. Today, you have to make two assignments, edit two more, check up on a writer whose work is late, help a writer who is having trouble…” and the list goes on and on. 

“…you need a killer hook. The first sentence has to capture the editor so fully that it will stick in her mind even after she’s sidetracked by 10 different tasks,” writes Glatzer. 

Read on for 52 ways to write interesting leads or introductions, and click on the book cover to learn more about Glatzer’s Make a Real Living as a Freelance Writer. 

52 Ways to Write Interesting Leads or Introductions

Writing interesting leads will be less difficult with these helpful writing tips for “killer hooks”: 

1. the single most interesting point in your article or essay
2. a current research finding (eg, “Novice freelance writers have higher blood pressure than established freelance writers.”)
3. an interesting fact
4. a question
5. an element of fantasy (eg, “Imagine a time when earning a living as a writer could be as easy as eating double chocolate chip cookies.”)
6. a little-known event
7. a season of the year
8. an observation
9. a definition
10. a feeling, emotion, or mood
11. dangerous or harmful objects in everyday life
12. a place description
13. an annual holiday
14. a personal vacation
15. an intriguing question
16. a shocking statement (eg, “Writing interesting leads is the only part of a freelance writing career that makes someone want to tear their eyelashes out.”
17. good or bad advice
18. an opinion
19. a obituary
20. a verse from the Bible
21. a controversial idea
22. statistical information
23. a question
24. a belief held by most people (eg, “Earning a living as a writer isn’t possible.”)
25. a specific problem
26. a common problem
27. a declarative statement (eg, “Young freelance writers have it easy these days! Back in my day…”)
28. a childhood memory
29. received wisdom (eg, “Writing guru Anne Lamott once told me…”)
30. a writing quip
31. a shared trait or quality
32. a dramatic, unusual, or surprising phrase
33. a physical or mental condition
34. historical figures
35. statements of command
36. an amusing or amazing encounter
37. a how-to lead
38. a hobby
39. a current TV personality or celebrity’s actions
40. a current news story
41. a breakthrough secret revealed
42. a cliché or overused expression
43. a reference to astrology or zodiac signs
44. describe a nationalist idea or action
45. the effects of change
46. a special promise
47. an anecdote
48. a quotation from a movie star or celebrity
49. a dream or nightmare
50. a profession or career reference
51. common everyday objects
52. info about current and/or historical events

When you’re writing a lead, heed Jenna Glatzer’s advice in Make a Real Living as a Freelance Writer:

First, she listed several examples of great introductions, such as “Joe Smith doesn’t want to be a priest anymore.”

Then she says, “Why do all of these examples work? Read any one of them, and the next thought in your mind, if I’ve done my job, should be, ‘Why?’ Or ‘How?’ “ 

Fellow scribes, writing interesting leads boils down to one simple (but difficult) idea: making the reader want to keep reading. If you have any tips on hooking readers, I welcome you below!

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