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	<title>Comments on: How to Write Good Sentences &#8211; 5 Tips for Making Your Words Flow</title>
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		<title>By: Vishal</title>
		<link>http://theadventurouswriter.com/blogwriting/5-tips-to-make-your-sentences-flow-good-writing-skills/comment-page-1/#comment-20224</link>
		<dc:creator>Vishal</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 30 Jan 2012 21:29:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>hey laurie..
this is a wise post...really helpful as i wanted to improve my writing skills... many times just good vocabulary isn&#039;t enough... your writing pattern must be concise and easy to understand...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>hey laurie..<br />
this is a wise post&#8230;really helpful as i wanted to improve my writing skills&#8230; many times just good vocabulary isn&#8217;t enough&#8230; your writing pattern must be concise and easy to understand&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Laurie Pawlik-Kienlen</title>
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		<dc:creator>Laurie Pawlik-Kienlen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 06 Aug 2011 23:05:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hello Howard,

Your English is pretty good! You just need a little practice :-) 

I wrote this article for you:

&lt;a href=&quot;http://theadventurouswriter.com/blogwriting/how-to-find-the-right-words-improve-english-writing-skills/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;How to Find the Right Words and Improve Your English Skills&lt;/a&gt;

The best way to write good sentences and paragraphs is to practice, practice, PRACTICE. It takes hours to excel at anything -- even for writers whose first language is English.

I hope the tips in the article help, and welcome your thoughts here or there.

All good things,
Laurie</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hello Howard,</p>
<p>Your English is pretty good! You just need a little practice <img src='http://theadventurouswriter.com/blogwriting/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' />  </p>
<p>I wrote this article for you:</p>
<p><a href="http://theadventurouswriter.com/blogwriting/how-to-find-the-right-words-improve-english-writing-skills/" rel="nofollow">How to Find the Right Words and Improve Your English Skills</a></p>
<p>The best way to write good sentences and paragraphs is to practice, practice, PRACTICE. It takes hours to excel at anything &#8212; even for writers whose first language is English.</p>
<p>I hope the tips in the article help, and welcome your thoughts here or there.</p>
<p>All good things,<br />
Laurie</p>
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		<title>By: Howard C.</title>
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		<dc:creator>Howard C.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 25 Jul 2011 11:46:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>your advices are quite helpful... thank you..
im an asain student studying in a foreign country.
ive found out this year that my favorite subject is english, and i want to improve it;but some of my english words&#039; pronunciation are still wrong,i dont know how to use words that give people flowless ideas ,and sometimes i dont even know what is the adj. or adv. that i must add in a sentence to make it better.can u give me some advice?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>your advices are quite helpful&#8230; thank you..<br />
im an asain student studying in a foreign country.<br />
ive found out this year that my favorite subject is english, and i want to improve it;but some of my english words&#8217; pronunciation are still wrong,i dont know how to use words that give people flowless ideas ,and sometimes i dont even know what is the adj. or adv. that i must add in a sentence to make it better.can u give me some advice?</p>
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		<title>By: Laurie Pawlik-Kienlen</title>
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		<dc:creator>Laurie Pawlik-Kienlen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 16 Apr 2011 23:11:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for your comments; I appreciate your appreciation :-)

Another tip for writing good sentences and paragraphs is to make sure your transitions are smooth and clear to the reader (not just to you as the writer!).</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for your comments; I appreciate your appreciation <img src='http://theadventurouswriter.com/blogwriting/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>Another tip for writing good sentences and paragraphs is to make sure your transitions are smooth and clear to the reader (not just to you as the writer!).</p>
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		<dc:creator>The Most Important Job for Writers – Being Sticky, Concrete, Memorable</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 22 Apr 2010 14:17:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: 5 Signs of Bad Writing – How to Recognize Poorly Written Work</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Apr 2010 21:58:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: RB</title>
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		<dc:creator>RB</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 05 Oct 2009 01:42:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Clear, concise tips.  Appreciated :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Clear, concise tips.  Appreciated <img src='http://theadventurouswriter.com/blogwriting/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Lilly R.</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lilly R.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Oct 2009 13:11:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I just want to say - thank you for this! Very helpful article.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I just want to say &#8211; thank you for this! Very helpful article.</p>
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